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The Weight of the Sun

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I miss you more than my beating heart
Just like my arms around you, it was torn part
And I lost the ability to love once more
I need to piece myself together again

But what's the point? If I'll come undone
Again, inconsolable, under the weight of the sun
That's how I feel without you
How I've felt every day, every moment

I've wanted to say "I love you"
For the longest time, before you left
And as I wipe the tears away
I can`t help but become undone

I`m still bleeding, still hurting
I`m still beating, this heart beat every fleeing
I`ve screwed up too many times to count
Too many times, I`ve got too many doubts

I`m broken beyond belief
Trying to find the light of relief
But it's always fading away
I`m still searching to this very day

Into the dark void of emptiness I reside
And in this pain somehow I still decide
To keep waiting for that special one
Who`ll share with me the weight of the sun
Something i wrote during the week, i've been so busy lately i haven't had much time to write, but i think i like this one haha
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debidebdebdeb's avatar
My soulmate asked me to check this out. Sais we could relate to it. Yes indeed. Excellent poem.
To my friend and lover I say: keep waiting for that special one? You do that. See how that works for you.
Meanwhile, the Specai One will move on and find someone who appreciates howw special he is.
Here is my advice. Don't wait another minute to tell me how you feel. Tell me you love me. You want to say it,and I need to hear it. I don't care how nroken you think you are. I will help put you back together,with love,tenderness,
kindness. I adore you, flaws and all.